Monday, March 16, 2015

blog about first full draft

GOALS:
 
Because this blog is due tomorrow, when the full first draft is due, one of my goals is to hand in a full first draft.  I have a goal to re-read my entire paper aloud tonight before sending in and printing out my final paper.  I did this over the weekend while working on the draft, and caught many of the mistakes and awkward language I had used, and fixed them.  Another goal I have for the week is to work on the draft with any feedback I get.

ACTIVITIES:

This weekend I added a lot of discussion to my quotes, which Sarah had suggested.  I had not realized how much lack of discussion I had!  Luckily, now I feel as though my paper has enough content that I can continue to add to if needed.

PROBLEMS:

I have a 14 page paper right now (works cited included).  I have to figure out what parts to cut while still retaining a solid argument that doesn't require me to alter a lot of my paper.

REFLECTIONS:

I wish my paper could be longer :(

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